You have lots of lovely pictures but you could make the title (Al Battani) a bit bigger. Next time give a lot more information and check your work for punctuation errors, capital letters and missing words.
From Blake and Adam
I really like the pictures. Could you try improving your spelling please?
I think you have put a lot of effort into this. Next time put some more writing and not so many pictures.
I agree not so much writing.
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You have lots of lovely pictures but you could make the title (Al Battani) a bit bigger. Next time give a lot more information and check your work for punctuation errors, capital letters and missing words.
From Blake and Adam
I really like the pictures. Could you try improving your spelling please?
I think you have put a lot of effort into this. Next time put some more writing and not so many pictures.
I agree not so much writing.