We think you were quite funny and creative but you need to work on your spelling as that would make your blog even better.
I like your blog but you can add some more detail.Amber and Sophia
We like your blog but we think you might need to improve your spellings a bit. We also thought you could try and make it about something more sensible .It is good that you tried you best but work on those errors please.
Kani and Elizabeth
1st you are a bit silly about the £10000 2nd we like your whole blog but it was very messy and the letter are upside down 3rd why is this blog completely silly its not a lie i really don’t understand what are you trying to say please tell us in the comments.
It was a test! It was put there to show you how some people ( like me) waste their time on the internet when it COULD be used for really good stuff! I hope that you’ll make the internet a better place if you learn from my ‘silliness’!
We like your creativity with the funny pictures,
But maybe you can make the words more clear and use more real information.
Also try to use only one exclamation marks next time because a lot of exclamation marks isn’t appropriate.
I think that you should correct your spellings,but i think it’s very creative and clever.
By Luke and Beau
you need to fix your i and change it to a capital.
We think you were quite funny and creative but you need to work on your spelling as that would make your blog even better.
I like your blog but you can add some more detail.Amber and Sophia
We like your blog but we think you might need to improve your spellings a bit. We also thought you could try and make it about something more sensible .It is good that you tried you best but work on those errors please.
Kani and Elizabeth
We really like your pictures of the mouse and cheese, but you could improve your spelling
Hi ,I think you should check you’re spelling.I really like you’re blog because i like how you’re writing spins around. Hinata and Safia.
Improve on spelling and I will like it if you stop that word spinning.From Jack and Sid
I think your blog is a bit disorganised because all of it is about cheese and there are too many exclamation marks.
from Abdul and George.
1st you are a bit silly about the £10000 2nd we like your whole blog but it was very messy and the letter are upside down 3rd why is this blog completely silly its not a lie i really don’t understand what are you trying to say please tell us in the comments.
from Louis & Aliyah. : )
It was a test! It was put there to show you how some people ( like me) waste their time on the internet when it COULD be used for really good stuff! I hope that you’ll make the internet a better place if you learn from my ‘silliness’!
We like your creativity with the funny pictures,
But maybe you can make the words more clear and use more real information.
Also try to use only one exclamation marks next time because a lot of exclamation marks isn’t appropriate.
By Asal and Artuss
it is good but please work on your spelling and you were being creative which is good.
sorry I didn’t write my name.
sophia