Maybe you need some pictures of a mouse eating cheese with smell coming of it. Also ! like the puzzle that you made but if i were you I would make the size bigger.from Julius and Hanad.
I like your blog (especially the mouse) !But you should check it again because you made some spelling mistakes. Also you said you would give us £10000 if we liked your blog but you won’t!I’m sorry but we think it doesn’t make sense.
I like your blog (especially the mouse which the cheese )!But here are some ways to improve it:Firstly I spotted some spelling mistakes like “blog” was spelt “bloog”. Secondly you put ” There is cheese all over the world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” spinning a bit to fast so it is tricky to read.Thirdly the puzzle is really difficult to make I tried to make it but I failed so I think you should make it easier.Finally you said you would give me £10000 if we liked your blog but I don’t really think you would.
I’m sorry but I don’t really understand it I just don’t think it makes sense.
I like your blog but check your spelling before you send it but your one was very creative because it show you put effort
into your presentation
from christo and Hussein
I like your blog but you should improve your spellings and I don’t know were you get the money from.I couldn’t read the spinning words because it was to fast to read.And the puzzle was to tricky so make it easier. Aryan and William
We like your blog because of all your creative ideas but you should work on your spellings.We think that you need to work a bit more on your presentation. Here are some handy hints to help you:
Firstly, you put a million exclamation marks,
Secondly, you put ” there is cheese all over the wurld!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! spinning so quickly we couldn’t read it.
Lucia & Flora
We think you need some spelling lessons and don’t write upside down next time because you can’t read it properly because it spins too fast. We like the picture of the mouse! Maybe you should concentrate on adding more information next time.
Your blog is funny for everybody to watch and you,ll really like it.
We like your blog because its full of cheese but everything is upside down.I really like the mouse creeping to the cheese.
Is your blog suppose to be upside down? We think if your writing wasn’t upside down it would be a big improvement. We think it has some good ideas and we like the subject.
The pictures were very colourful and pretty,but your writing wasn’t very clear and it didn’t make sense. Also,we don’t think you were telling the truth about the £1OOOO! But, we could tell you spent a lot of time on your blog!
I like your blog because I like cheese but your words are upside down. Also you used to much exclamation marks and as well I don’t think the amount of money is realistic .
Hard to read we think you should concentrate on your spelling.
I like it but work on your spelling.
You have an outstanding blog but improve please on your spelling.
Your blog is very creative and would lure people in easily but it could be improved by correcting spellings and make it a bit clearer.
from Blake and Adam
Why is the letter moving?
He edited it.
I like it but work on your spelling.
You did a very good job but I DONT think its very necessery.
What isn’t necessary – I don’t understand your comment.
Very interesting but you could improve it and check spelling. Sorry to say but we don’t think it makes sense.
Well done on your first blogg .Try and focus on your spelling and it was very hard to read and understand .
A good blog Mr Mahew
I think you should focus on your spelling
It is a little funny but put less pictures and I think you are lying about the £10000.
I agree he is not telling the truth about the £10000.
It was also quite creative
Maybe you need some pictures of a mouse eating cheese with smell coming of it. Also ! like the puzzle that you made but if i were you I would make the size bigger.from Julius and Hanad.
Otherwise your blog is amazing!
We really like your blog but there may be a few errors.
1.the words lik, bloog and wurd,do you mean like, blog and word.
2.try not to write upside down we can’t read it
3.Don’t spin the words around,we get confused .
we had really enjoyed your blog.
It isn’t very necessery to blog something silly.
I like your blog (especially the mouse) !But you should check it again because you made some spelling mistakes. Also you said you would give us £10000 if we liked your blog but you won’t!I’m sorry but we think it doesn’t make sense.
It was good but hard to read
I like it but you need to improve on your spelling
I like your blog but you could focus a bit more next time . from Elsie and Caitlin
I like your blog (especially the mouse which the cheese )!But here are some ways to improve it:Firstly I spotted some spelling mistakes like “blog” was spelt “bloog”. Secondly you put ” There is cheese all over the world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” spinning a bit to fast so it is tricky to read.Thirdly the puzzle is really difficult to make I tried to make it but I failed so I think you should make it easier.Finally you said you would give me £10000 if we liked your blog but I don’t really think you would.
I’m sorry but I don’t really understand it I just don’t think it makes sense.
We like your blog but we think you could make a few improvements for e.g spellings only one ! but well done for having a go.
Isabel and Nika
We like your blog but you need to check your spellings.Maybe you should not make your writing go round and upside down.
Maddie and Sashka
I like your blog but check your spelling before you send it but your one was very creative because it show you put effort
into your presentation
from christo and Hussein
I really like the cheese puzzle but work on spelling and make it more clear.
Daryan and Krishan
I like your blog but you should improve your spellings and I don’t know were you get the money from.I couldn’t read the spinning words because it was to fast to read.And the puzzle was to tricky so make it easier. Aryan and William
I think is very cool but you have to check your spelling if it is right or wrong.
Abhi
We like your blog because of all your creative ideas but you should work on your spellings.We think that you need to work a bit more on your presentation. Here are some handy hints to help you:
Firstly, you put a million exclamation marks,
Secondly, you put ” there is cheese all over the wurld!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! spinning so quickly we couldn’t read it.
Lucia & Flora
We like the animation,improve your spelling
Bhim & Thibault
We think you need some spelling lessons and don’t write upside down next time because you can’t read it properly because it spins too fast. We like the picture of the mouse! Maybe you should concentrate on adding more information next time.
Taran and Zara
Very good creative, fabulous diagram but next time don’t make upside down writing because it’s too complex.
Inian, Leo and Stella
Where would you get the money from? It is quite pointless to put all those exclamation marks . # spinning words hard to read but it’s funny.
You are being creative, the exclamation marks are strange , we cant read your writing and concentrate From Alex B AND Sebastian
We like the design and detail but all the exclamation marks are unnecessary.We like the creativity but we can’t read the writing that spins around.
Alex-s Jaser
Your blog is funny for everybody to watch and you,ll really like it.
We like your blog because its full of cheese but everything is upside down.I really like the mouse creeping to the cheese.
by Omar and Lara
Is your blog suppose to be upside down? We think if your writing wasn’t upside down it would be a big improvement. We think it has some good ideas and we like the subject.
The pictures were very colourful and pretty,but your writing wasn’t very clear and it didn’t make sense. Also,we don’t think you were telling the truth about the £1OOOO! But, we could tell you spent a lot of time on your blog!
MILLI & RIONA
Good work, but check your spelling properly and don’t do too much exclamation marks . from Khyan and Adrian
I like your blog because I like cheese but your words are upside down. Also you used to much exclamation marks and as well I don’t think the amount of money is realistic .
Moana and Simeon